Congratulations!  Going now to check it out!

Do you have the ability to customize the page at all to include a more graphic header and more visual interest on the page?

It seems like you have some great things to share but it's just very text heavy and tough to take it all in.

Just a thought - hope it helps!

Hi, Di. Congratulations on your first ebook!

I think your sales page could use some reworking. Your sales button should be where people can see it when they first get to the page.

You also might want to break your pitch down into smaller segments.

-Virginia

Thank you Charlene and Virginia.

Really appreciate it.Will redo it tonight.

Di

I agree, a picture of some kind would be nice. I tend to scan pages for info to see if I want to stick around and pictures catch my eye.

Thanks Kris for taking the time.